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Deep-set, azure eyes.
Eyes with a past you could not know.
And even if you did you would think it—
indelible, impregnable, inevitable.

Eyes set in the most unlikely of faces,
Jetting out from a tanned, hard face.
This profile is tough, daunting,
the skin roughened and even virile.

With each stride I find trouble,
and in every breath there is a war.
But it makes no difference to me.
Come at me, if you even dare.

As I brush at the gleam in my mahogany hair—
I turn and I find a myriad of lives.
Lives well-spent, others at quite the loss.
But such a destiny is mine to write.

I am the Chosen One.
I fight for what I believe in.
And no matter the heat, no matter the struggle—
I will forever continue to fight.
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Inspired by the new and upcoming sequel to Avatar: the Last Airbender...comes The Legend of Korra. I am so excited! I love Korra's fiery spirit, and so I wanted to capture that in my poem...I hope you like it C:

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~punker--rocker Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For some reason it always surprises me when I find really good fan poetry, but this is great! Somehow you've really captured, like you call it, her fiery spirit, as well as her fearlessness and determination. The middle stanza is the best, I think. It's the most poetic. :D
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~AngelWingss07 Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very, very much! :D I tried!
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Mood: Love ~BenjaminHopkins Jun 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
If LoK were a movie, this would be a voice-over in the epilogue...
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~AngelWingss07 Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D I wish!
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Mood: Love ~BenjaminHopkins Jun 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
A deviant can dream...
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This is great! It reminds me of that episode of Avatar: The last Airbender when Sokka sees the poem girls... Haha!
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~AngelWingss07 May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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It's beautiful :love:
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~AngelWingss07 Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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Mood: Love ~sunchild22 Apr 12, 2012  Student Photographer
Very, very awesome work here, AngelWings! I love this piece on KORRA!
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